Hi Tim :) Here is the plan and the look for CareInMyCorner, scene by scene. Every line of voice is your script, word for word, and every app screen is your real app with the demo data.
Have a look, write a note under any scene you want changed, and press the button at the bottom. Then paste it to me in our chat.
It sits next to Film 1 like a series, but warmer. Film 1 was for government, this one is for families.
Taken from your site: deep teal, sea glass, cream and a touch of coral. No navy and cyan here, that stays with Film 1.
Space Grotesk for the big words and DM Sans for captions. The same two fonts your site uses.
Gorey harbour for Jersey and St Peter Port for Guernsey. Real places, nothing that could be mistaken for somewhere else.
Your screens fill almost the whole frame. The part being talked about comes forward and the page goes soft behind it.
Slow, eased moves. No fast cuts, no flashing. Captions stay long enough to read.
The Film 1 voice, and a warm quiet piano under it, in the spirit of the Proof 1 track you picked last time.
The pictures are plan frames, so you can judge the idea and the layout. In the film everything moves.
Voice
“In the Channel Islands, navigating health and care shouldn't feel like a solo journey.”
On screen
Your health, in your corner.
What you see
Gorey harbour in Jersey, in daylight. Your logo is on screen from the very first frame, so chat and social apps preview a bright branded picture, never a dark one.
Voice
“When you're waiting for an assessment, managing complex needs,”
On screen
Clarity when waiting.
What you see
Someone at home with paperwork and a phone. Calm, no clinic, no drama.
Voice
“or supporting an elderly relative, clarity matters.”
On screen
Support for ADHD, care & wellbeing.
What you see
A relative being looked after at home, both at ease.
Voice
“CareInMyCorner puts self-care tools,”
On screen
Your corner
What you see
Your real app, almost full screen, signed in as Alice. Her check-in card and her Next Small Step card come forward.
Voice
“calm-in-the-moment support,”
On screen
Calm in the moment.
What you see
The page glides down to "A gentle pause". The two-minute reset comes forward and slowly breathes.
Voice
“and clear pathways right in your hands.”
On screen
My Next Small Step.
What you see
Alice's real plan: three steps done, three to go. St Aubin's Bay, Gorey, Howard Davis Park. A soft highlight walks down the open steps.
Voice
“Designed to connect what already exists across Jersey and Guernsey,”
On screen
Connecting Island Care.
What you see
Alice shares her wellbeing with Chloe. The screen shows it is active, when Chloe looked, and the Stop sharing button. Her choice, visible.
Voice
“protecting island budgets by making everyday care simpler.”
On screen
Jersey · Guernsey · UK
What you see
We cross to Guernsey: St Peter Port harbour.
Voice
“Your health, your family, your corner. Explore the preview today.”
On screen
www.careinmycorner.com
What you see
Heart icon, name, your line, one web address and the short disclaimer. It holds for about 7 seconds so it can be read.